I attended Kathleen Tolan’s “Once You Have Taught Workshops for Years, How Do You Go from Good to Great? Tap the Power of Peer Conferring and Supporting Student Independence and Goal-Setting.” Workshop at the TCRWP Writing Institute. Kathleen’s session made me realize that once we’ve been doing this work (i.e., writing workshop) for awhile, it’s up to us to help kids learn how to confer with each other in meaningful ways. Basic writing partnerships can be enhanced by increasing our expectations of what kids are capable of in partnerships.
Tolan suggested sliding partnerships into peer conferring. In order to do this, you must recognize there are two kinds of peer conferring:
1) One student teaches, the other student learns. Sometimes Partner A is stronger than Partner B is at something (e.g., focusing their writing). The kid with the stronger skill might teach their partner how to get better at something. Another time Partner B might be stronger than Partner A at something (e.g., elaborating with a variety of details). That’s when Partner B gets to step into the teacher role to teach Partner A how to do something better. Essentially, one partner is always helping their partner become more proficient at something.
2) Partners learn alongside each other to get better at a skill. Sometimes both members of a partnership aren’t proficient with an aspect of writing (e.g., writing with voice). Together they decide to work together to get better at doing the thing they’re both struggling with (in this case, making their writing sound like themselves). When Tolan initially suggested this, I panicked. Why would I want to put two kids — who are struggling at the same thing — together? But then she likened it to two colleagues learning together to get better at something (e.g., how to teach the Units of Study better). And that’s when I realized this idea is genius! If you foster the kind of classroom that has a strong classroom community and a growth mindset, I can envision this kind of peer conferring would be powerful because students are engaged in their learning and are problem-solving together to become stronger writers.
Tolan showed us a video from TCRWP’s Vimeo site
(which is a GOLDMINE if you’re unfamiliar with it!). She asked us to think about what Angelina and Justin, the kids in the video, did well. Before I tell you what those of us in the session noticed, I’ll let you watch it:
Peer Conferring: Students Teach Each Other to Revise in Order to Orient their Readers (3-5) from TC Reading and Writing Project on Vimeo.
Here’s what we noticed Angelina and Justin doing well:
- Justin: He listened well. He was persistent. He was clear and blunt (e.g., your transitions aren’t explicit). He didn’t give her the answer. Rather he explained himself and showed her his own writing.
- Angelina: She defended her writing (which showed us what she knew and didn’t know). She responded like a writer when he taught her something. She had an a-ha moment.
Would you like your students to move from working in writing partnerships to having the ability to engage in peer conferring? Here are some tips:
- Show students this video and lead a discussion about what worked, what they noticed these writers doing, and how they could transfer what they observed Angelina and Justin doing to the work they do with their writing partner.
- Employ the P, Q, P Technique. Jim Vopat suggested the “Praise, Question, Polish” Technique for peer conferring in Micro Lessons in Writing. I created a scaffold for my fourth graders to use, based on this technique, several years ago. It’s a good way to get kids, who are new to peer conferring, started with providing each other compliments and critical feedback. Click here to download the sheet. After a few uses of this sheet, it should fade away, like all scaffolds.
- Fishbowl great conferences. You can do one of two things when you notice a partnership engaged in a powerful peer conference. You can stop your entire class and invite them to listen and watch what their peers are doing. If you’d prefer not to stop everyone, record the conference on your smartphone and show it to your entire class during share time or the following day.
- Have partnerships meet at least twice a week. Tolan asserted this kind of frequency not only helps you as a teacher (once kids are trained to confer with each other), but helps build rapport amongst writers.
How do you help your students learn to confer in meaningful ways? Please share your tips by leaving a comment.
Published by Stacey Shubitz
I am a literacy consultant who focuses on writing workshop. I've been working with K-6 teachers and students since 2009. Prior to that, I was a fourth and fifth-grade teacher in New York City and Rhode Island.
I'm the author of Craft Moves (Stenhouse Publishers, 2016) and the co-author of Jump Into Writing (Zaner-Bloser, 2021), Welcome to Writing Workshop (Stenhouse Publishers, 2019), and Day By Day (Stenhouse, 2010).
I live in Central Pennsylvania with my husband and children. In my free time, I enjoy swimming, doing Pilates, cooking, baking, making ice cream, and reading novels.
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6 thoughts on “Moving from Partnerships to Peer Conferring”
I love the PQP form as a guide for our writers! I’ve downloaded and saved to my TWT folder. Thank you!
I’m grateful to know about the TCRWP Vimeo site as I always learn best by seeing something in action! I really want to empower my students to do more this year and I think helping each other grow as writers through partnerships would further this goal! Thanks Stacey!
We worked on this last year in 5th grade, Stacey. Thanks for sharing this video – would have been great to have this model last year! I’ll be sure to share it this year.
I read about PQP years ago (early 90s), but not sure where and used it very successfully in 5th grade as a part of writing workshop. Easy for kids to remember and once you practice it, they do get it, even if you are not a 100% TCRWP school/follower. 3rd graders also would use it very well. I had an editing checklist to use with your “buddy” from the old Weehawken Writing Project called ILA (Individualized Language Arts) that was popular before Don Graves’ and Lucy’s and Nancie Atwell’s work spread far and wide (so back in the later 70s and early 80s). One phrase I taught my 5th graders to say to each other was, “I suggest we check on your commas in this paragraph, what do you see?, if the other child could not figure it out, the “teacher” would say I’d like to suggest you put one here and here, you this is a list, etc. Listening to them do those early oeer conferences was pretty eye-opening and this was before I had heard about WW (that was around 1986!). Don Grraves’ book and then Nancie’s, changed my teaching and my life. And of course I began to read and listen to anything Lucy had to say. However back then I was an island, but I persevered. It has been wonderful to see how Don’s early work has flourished in so many places and ways since the early days. I not longer teach, but I still miss workshop time! And love hearing about new ideas and all the terrific sharing. I would not feel like an island in this day and age. Remember there was no blogging or internet back then!!
I haven’t tried this, but maybe they could video one of their conferences and then watch it together to reflect on how it went.
Thanks for sharing such a detailed overview of your session. I felt like I was there. And for the PQP form. I do think at the start a scaffolded sheet can really help to push students to be a stronger partner.
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