It’s Day 13 Classroom Slicers!
On Monday, Stacey wrote a post about opening lines. She offers great advice for those wishing to get more from their opening lines.
Some of her tips:
OPENING LINES COULD…
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Give readers a sense of character, place, and what’s going on.
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Provide readers with a sense of closeness.
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Make an honest declaration to the reader.
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Draw the reader in by using the 1st person.
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Talk to the reader in the 2nd person.
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Give a sense of who the character is and where they live.
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Tell everything the character is meaning to tell (without meaning to tell).
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Establish a sense of voice that involves the reader, invites them in, welcomes them into the story, and makes seem curious about that world.
Today as you Slice, why not spend some time revising your opening lines?
Happy Slicing!
Useful Links:
- 31 Slices (ideas for topics)
- Essential Information
- Q&A About the Classroom Slice of Life Story Challenge (watch a video call with elementary school students)
Day 13:
http://merelylearningtogether.weebly.com/1/post/2014/03/slice-of-life-day-13.html
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There are some great posts here today: a poem about Legos, a letter to a dead walnut, and a 6th grade version of Today I Love…I am honored to serve up our slices tonight!
http://creatively-cardinal.blogspot.com/2014/03/call-for-slices-thursday-march-13-slice.html
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6th graders speaking their hearts: http://slicesfrompod2.blogspot.com/2014/03/march-13th-slices.html
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Thanks for sharing the opening lines tips! I will have to include it on our next post! Here are our slice of life posts from my 5th graders: http://mskimgrade5.blogspot.sg/2014/03/slice-of-life-challenge-day-13.html
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I forgot to link up again! But my students are writing like mad. We went on a field trip and they couldn’t wait to get back to write about it! http://kidblog.org/SliceofLifeChallenge/
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http://fromourkingzoo.blogspot.com/2014/03/the-car.html
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State testing is almost over!!! My students are persevering, AND they’re still writing! https://twowritingteachers.wordpress.com/2014/03/13/classroom-slice-of-life-story-challenge-day-12-of-31-2/
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Ok, now that’s embarrassing! I copied THIS link to tweet it out to my kids… and then pasted it here without even realizing it! Thanks to Jaana for noticing! Obviously, you won’t find my students’ writing here… but you will find it HERE: http://kidblog.org/WritingOurOwnWords/tag/slice-of-life/
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So proud of my students. 14/23 have posted everyday so far and most have only missed 1-2 days!
http://maxsclassreads.blogspot.com/2014/03/solsc-13-of-31-max-and-kams-class.html
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It’s Grandparent’s Day at school and the third graders are slicing about them.
http://3rdgradeslicers.wordpress.com/2014/03/13/solsc-march-13-2014/
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http://kidblog.org/2014-2/
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Reading some wonderful slices during the second half of Spring break.
http://kidblog.org/MrsKeelersRLAclass/
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A mom allows her son to overindulge…
http://wp.me/p16XoV-1g
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We are back in school and slicing as I type. Thank you for the opening lines thinking – my students are reflecting on good leads…
http://kidblog.org/MrsRogersBloggers13-14II/ and http://kidblog.org/MrsRogersBloggers13-14/
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Below please find the link to 6B Slicers’ posts. Many students will be completing their posts for homework. Thanks!
http://6bslicers.blogspot.com/2014/03/slice-of-life-13.html
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Thank you for the opening lines; very helpful! Today’s sixth grade slices can be found in my comments section.
http://smpeters5.wordpress.com/2014/03/13/solsc-13-the-haze/
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Working our way into Day #13 of the SOLSC. Students will be adding post link in the comment section, later in the day . http://iskl6aslicers.blogspot.com/2014/03/slice-of-life-13.html
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These tips for Classroom Slicers are fabulous! I’m finding them helpful as I think about my own writing!!! 🙂 THANKS!
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