Yesterday I checked in on a blog that is becoming a favorite — Cool People I Know. Little Purple Cow (aka Stephanie) had posted a poem in a form called etheree. (It’s a focus on syllables. Each line gains a syllable until you reach the last line of 10.) Her poem inspired me to write one too. Here’s to trying new things.
Concrete Love
Love
is a
feeling, yes.
But action too.
I know this because:
Car warmed each morning;
Wood stacked by the fire;
Tea made to perfection each day;
The kitchen cleaned during bath time.
Are concrete reminders that he loves me.
Curious to learn more about etheree? Check out Cool People I Know & follow the links Stephanie offers.
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I love your poem! I am going to have to try it! Thanks for sharing and for letting us know about the blog you got it from. 🙂
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I’ve never heard of this form before. Fun! I enjoyed your poem and the person behind it:>) Thanks.
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What a fun new poetry form! Great poem, too! (Wouldn’t want one without the other…)
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Enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing and connecting with me.
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Great to see your poem! And yes, here’s to trying new things. What a lovely blog you have here.
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That’s just lovely. Here’s to Concrete Love! Etheree is completely new to me. We gave Fibs a try with good results, so I’m looking forward to trying etheree with my kids. Not to mention some concrete love tokens…
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That’s a great poem! I know the etheree was named after the woman who created it, but I’ve not yet tried one.
Yours is spectacular.
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Hey this is my kind of poem! I love the photos too. Thanks for the link. I’ll be trying this form myself soon.
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